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    Shockwave

    I think he needs to C a mental health professional, OP seems like he’d scare the hoes

    Mentally I’m doing fine. Novelty writing actually helps lol. Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot. Thanks for being concerned. Really though

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    You submitted this in a college class?

  • Jan 31, 2021
    frenchpress

    you can format on ktt2 as well

    try out these lines


    they look cool

  • Jan 31, 2021
    Shockwave

    I think he needs to C a mental health professional, OP seems like he’d scare the hoes

    He needs to C himself out of society

  • Jan 31, 2021
    KEV

    This is worse than bad

    It's quite terrible

    What could be improved? Thanks for criticism aswell

  • Jan 31, 2021
    DonutHole

    "Kept a secret my father always gets a handjob out of me. We consider this our bonding and love for each other as men. I love you Eddie"

  • Jan 31, 2021
    DonutHole

    "Kept a secret my father always gets a handjob out of me. We consider this our bonding and love for each other as men. I love you Eddie"

  • Jan 31, 2021

    beginning life as another mans ejaculation

  • LuJo

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    Offline

    You submitted this in a college class?

    Yea. They don’t judge subject matter. They judge the writing itself. It’s a beginner course so I passed. My professor did mention he was concerned but he noted he’s heard worse (which I don’t believe lol)

  • Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

    LMAO.

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    worldpeace
    !https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sqyQMX4rwHs

    who da f*** made this man

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    rayray

    Yea. They don’t judge subject matter. They judge the writing itself. It’s a beginner course so I passed. My professor did mention he was concerned but he noted he’s heard worse (which I don’t believe lol)

    how did you end up choosing this as the subject matter

  • sace 👍
    Jan 31, 2021

    op wrote this as a college paper

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    rayray

    Yea. They don’t judge subject matter. They judge the writing itself. It’s a beginner course so I passed. My professor did mention he was concerned but he noted he’s heard worse (which I don’t believe lol)

    always interested in short stories. you should update and post more if its really a passion

  • Jan 31, 2021

    Ok de Sade

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    VA7a

    who da f*** made this man

    director of hereditary and midsommar

  • Jan 31, 2021

    Op it’s good story but those lines are mad suss

  • Jan 31, 2021
    rayray

    Mentally I’m doing fine. Novelty writing actually helps lol. Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot. Thanks for being concerned. Really though

    “Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot.”

    haha son an incest relationship HAHAhhaha that’s such a joke...unless....

  • Jan 31, 2021
    worldpeace

    director of hereditary and midsommar

    I enjoyed those movies

  • Jan 31, 2021
    rayray

    Mentally I’m doing fine. Novelty writing actually helps lol. Me and my father joke about these what if’s a lot. Thanks for being concerned. Really though

    Yall joke about it

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    Wait @op posted this earlier

    It all makes sense now

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