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  • Jan 31, 2021
    frenchpress

    yooo i was already imagining rwina as the main character and this foto settles it

    ?

  • Wtf guys

  • Jan 31, 2021

    not reading this s***!!!!!!!

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    rayray

    Appreciate criticism. What didn’t you enjoy and how can I improve?

    Nigga how bout not writing sexual stories about ur father

  • Jan 31, 2021
    GIO GIO

    Saw the thread title and thought it couldn’t possibly be about what my first impression was

    yeah, it's a very perplexing title. but then you learn it delivers on its promises! nice one op

  • Jan 31, 2021
    Shockwave

    Lmao the writing was subpar, his career in the erotic fiction genre is never gonna get off the ground

    I wasn’t aiming for that genre. Was aiming for like a greys anatomy type. But thanks for the doubts

  • Jan 31, 2021
    ASAKI

    OP's dad when he sees his son around the corner

    im dying

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    What do you think your professor would think it this OP? I don’t think you’d receive a high grade

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    Hedobevibindoe

    Nigga how bout not writing sexual stories about ur father

  • Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

  • Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    Shockwave

    What do you think your professor would think it this OP? I don’t think you’d receive a high grade

    For a amateur in writing I’ll give it a C. It looks way better on Google doc

  • Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

    here we go 📈

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    rayray

    For a amateur in writing I’ll give it a C. It looks way better on Google doc

    how bout you C some b****es

  • Jan 31, 2021
    PUYOL2

    how bout you C some b****es

  • sace 👍
    Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

  • Jan 31, 2021

    OP

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    PUYOL2

    how bout you C some b****es

    My girl likes the story. I always get a woman’s perspective on my a***ytical writing. Thanks though

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    rayray

    For a amateur in writing I’ll give it a C. It looks way better on Google doc

    you can format on ktt2 as well

  • Jan 31, 2021
    rayray

    My girl likes the story. I always get a woman’s perspective on my a***ytical writing. Thanks though

    man

  • Jan 31, 2021

    that disclaimer is genius

  • TribeCalledWest

  • Jan 31, 2021

    great, sounds stimulating

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    PUYOL2

    how bout you C some b****es

    I think he needs to C a mental health professional, OP seems like he’d scare the hoes

  • KEV 🧊
    Jan 31, 2021
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    This is worse than bad

    It's quite terrible

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