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  • Nort 💫
    Nov 6, 2023
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    Bro0o0ses

    Dude said he had k10s with no photos of the k10s

    Gonna be a problem

    Big issue

    starting to think this guy is just flapping his gums

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    Mmm Hmm

    Did u like school

    I dropped out of school after consistently not going when I was in the 10th grade then they tried to force me to do online school

    Which I also didn't do

    But when I was like forced to or actually trying I did really good and got As or high Bs

    Just couldn't force myself to go and pay attention really

  • Nort 💫
    Nov 6, 2023
    im almost there

    i thought i posted them before itt

    charlie

    chester

    absolutely yes

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    26k pages of vz planning

  • Nort 💫
    Nov 6, 2023
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    where am i

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    Mmm Hmm

    If u need translations let me know

    2, 9, and 10 pls

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    Bro0o0ses

    I dropped out of school after consistently not going when I was in the 10th grade then they tried to force me to do online school

    Which I also didn't do

    But when I was like forced to or actually trying I did really good and got As or high Bs

    Just couldn't force myself to go and pay attention really

    Norts about to diagnose me based on this post I can feel it coming

  • e t 🎃
    Nov 6, 2023
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    Nort

    where am i

    Purgatory

  • Nov 6, 2023
    Nort

    starting to think this guy is just flapping his gums

  • Mmm Hmm 😆
    OP
    Nov 6, 2023
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    im almost there

    yes sorry im just rereading a few things to make sure i got it

    Summary is basically

    You need to work on voice influctuations (I think that's the word?)

    Emphasis on important words u want the listener to get

    Cuz alot of the words u say feels like a run on sentence unless I'm heavily paying attention or u stop the best for a second

    I think u got alot of good bars lost in the speed of ur raps
    I think if you slowed down they would hit harder

    Best selection was good

    I like ur flows

    Just need to add more passion to ur delivery

    Also I felt alot of Tyler influence and
    like one Kenny influence on track 13 I think

    Maybe some wutang?

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    Bro0o0ses

    Norts about to diagnose me based on this post I can feel it coming

    i already did

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    e t

    Purgatory

    is ur name supposed to be like yeti or just thanking ye

  • Nort 💫
    Nov 6, 2023

    you got to hell
    for what your
    dirty mind
    iiiiiisss
    thiiiiiiinking

    OooooOoooooooOooOooo

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    im almost there

    i already did

    tf happened to ur main

  • Nort 💫
    Nov 6, 2023
    Bro0o0ses

    Norts about to diagnose me based on this post I can feel it coming

    big doofus disorder

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    Mmm Hmm

    Did u like school

    But I think my handwriting is good

    Or at least good enough

  • Mmm Hmm 😆
    OP
    Nov 6, 2023
    Bro0o0ses

    I dropped out of school after consistently not going when I was in the 10th grade then they tried to force me to do online school

    Which I also didn't do

    But when I was like forced to or actually trying I did really good and got As or high Bs

    Just couldn't force myself to go and pay attention really

    I hated school and purposely got C's and D's once I realized grades didn't matter

    Cuz even the idiots failing tests were still passing somehow

    That stupid no kid left behind sht pissed me off tbh

  • Nort 💫
    Nov 6, 2023
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    Bro0o0ses

    But I think my handwriting is good

    Or at least good enough

    i would say this is really good

  • e t 🎃
    Nov 6, 2023
    Valid

    is ur name supposed to be like yeti or just thanking ye

    triple entendre

    ET
    Ye Ty Dolla Sign
    And what you said which I didn’t think about before

  • e t 🎃
    Nov 6, 2023
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    Valid

    is ur name supposed to be like yeti or just thanking ye

    Who is this btw

  • EchiCat 🐱
    Nov 6, 2023
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    Wake up! is da 6th of da month!

  • Nov 6, 2023
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    e t

    Who is this btw

    s

  • Mmm Hmm 😆
    OP
    Nov 6, 2023
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    im almost there

    2, 9, and 10 pls

    2. Vocals sounded low, voice way too monotone, need voice fluctuations

    9. You not even tryna try sht is all over the place

    10. Good, might as well get rid of that hook tho the 2x2 hook lol

  • Nov 6, 2023
    Mmm Hmm

    K here's my 1 listen review

  • Nov 6, 2023
    Nort

    i would say this is really good

    Dude thanks

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