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  • I hate everything about this thread.

  • Jan 31, 2021
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    rayray

    I strive off criticism not likes my friend. Thanks for stopping by though

    ok ill give u a critique, ur writing style is good but the subject matter is my problem. next time, try to write about something less abrasive uk

  • Jan 31, 2021

    AND THIS IS F***ING WILD @op AYO WTF

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    Mitch Baker

    This is amazing writing OP ppl like to put walls around creativity which is apparent in this thread (the entire thing is a metaphor by the way)

    EXACTLY. “METAPHOR”. People don’t understand context clues. The speaker is my mother and the son is the observer. I wrote it in a way that if you read it “literal” that you won’t catch it and assume im trying to have s***with my father

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    how'd u get into writing OP I been thinking of into getting into it for a while

  • Jan 31, 2021

    man This sxn is always boomin when I’m high as hell

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    Womanpuncher69

    how'd u get into writing OP I been thinking of into getting into it for a while

    suck ur dad off first

  • Jan 31, 2021

    then the creativity booms

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    PUYOL2

    suck ur dad off first

    Can you shut up damn don’t know when something’s done

  • Jan 31, 2021
    gobe

    OP off the c***blunts

    c***blunts got me howling

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    aye mods why are threads that i make about spin off ideas for TV Shows locked up but this is still not locked? Y’all gotta get your priorities in order

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    Ooo

    Can you shut up damn don’t know when something’s done

    y u mad at me for cooker?

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    ASAKI

  • Jan 31, 2021

    op definitely off something

  • Jan 31, 2021
    Ooo

    @op sid your teacher just say any creative writing prompt? What was she telling you guys to do?

    It was introduction. So she graded it off spelling and making sure we indent and use right words. She said be as creative as possible and write about anything. Luckily it’s a online class so I never have to see her in person lol

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    @YoungWaltDisney Both you and Luna are cuties 💜

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    Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

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    NeonNigga23

    ok ill give u a critique, ur writing style is good but the subject matter is my problem. next time, try to write about something less abrasive uk

    You can’t limit to what I wanna write about. That’s very rude honestly

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    PUYOL2

    suck ur dad off first

    damn incest and necrophilia

  • Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

    this format itt

  • Jan 31, 2021
    Womanpuncher69

    damn incest and necrophilia

  • Jan 31, 2021
    LuJo

    Christ

  • Jan 31, 2021

    um

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    Womanpuncher69

    how'd u get into writing OP I been thinking of into getting into it for a while

    I’m naturally just always fantasizing about something everyday. And I continue it throughout the day like it’s a episode. I started taking notes and writing it on paper and I noticed I like presenting it in a chapter manner. So I studied poetry

  • Jan 31, 2021

    is this satire

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