I strive off criticism not likes my friend. Thanks for stopping by though
ok ill give u a critique, ur writing style is good but the subject matter is my problem. next time, try to write about something less abrasive uk
This is amazing writing OP ppl like to put walls around creativity which is apparent in this thread (the entire thing is a metaphor by the way)
EXACTLY. “METAPHOR”. People don’t understand context clues. The speaker is my mother and the son is the observer. I wrote it in a way that if you read it “literal” that you won’t catch it and assume im trying to have s***with my father
how'd u get into writing OP I been thinking of into getting into it for a while
how'd u get into writing OP I been thinking of into getting into it for a while
suck ur dad off first
suck ur dad off first
Can you shut up damn don’t know when something’s done
aye mods why are threads that i make about spin off ideas for TV Shows locked up but this is still not locked? Y’all gotta get your priorities in order
Can you shut up damn don’t know when something’s done
y u mad at me for cooker?
@op sid your teacher just say any creative writing prompt? What was she telling you guys to do?
It was introduction. So she graded it off spelling and making sure we indent and use right words. She said be as creative as possible and write about anything. Luckily it’s a online class so I never have to see her in person lol
@YoungWaltDisney Both you and Luna are cuties 💜


ok ill give u a critique, ur writing style is good but the subject matter is my problem. next time, try to write about something less abrasive uk
You can’t limit to what I wanna write about. That’s very rude honestly
how'd u get into writing OP I been thinking of into getting into it for a while
I’m naturally just always fantasizing about something everyday. And I continue it throughout the day like it’s a episode. I started taking notes and writing it on paper and I noticed I like presenting it in a chapter manner. So I studied poetry