In terms of constructive criticism OP, don't stress syllables that aren't stressed in the original words, currently that's in the way of your flow sounding more natural. Like 'account' sounds better if you barely pronounce the a, like aCCOUNT, saying UH-count sounds jarring
Also seriously study how other rappers end their lines and what words they choose to emphasise, if you sound more natural and conversational you'll come off as more confident
Screenshotted so I don't give any unwarranted attention
Had to come back to this just to ask how do you have more people in your video than in your comments?
dude who are any of these people
they probably suck too!

Ngl, this my s***
lmao
bro i saw this thread page 1 with only like 3-4 comments and came back to all this i'm dying
Im such a good person because im a sjw and talk about mental health awareness and have pronouns in my bio - KTT
Disrespect a stranger and personally attack him on the internet cause you dont like his song - also KTT
mans whole gimmick now is to cry about sjw posters and act like people can’t get jokes off, op came off as an a****** who can’t take criticism so he opened the door for jokes.
aint gon lie man this nigga flow is dead terrible ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Sound like young gravy but flow kinda like a Mitch Hedberg.
Ngl, this my s***
lmao
Yung Gravy is corny but he does have an effortless confidence that makes him likeable
bro forgot to pay for views on pt3

"Drake Saved My Life"
that post from OP about working at lids really f***ed it all up
theres still time for op to redeem himself after this
Just prove everyone wrong and drop a fire song as well as a formal apology to Lids
Im such a good person because im a sjw and talk about mental health awareness and have pronouns in my bio - KTT
Disrespect a stranger and personally attack him on the internet cause you dont like his song - also KTT
There’s such a thing as …different users 😱
theres still time for op to redeem himself after this
Just prove everyone wrong and drop a fire song as well as a formal apology to Lids
Drake saved my life pt 4
"Drake Saved My Life"
there's too much to dissect here that the corniness of this title is being underrated lmao
mans whole gimmick now is to cry about sjw posters and act like people can’t get jokes off, op came off as an a****** who can’t take criticism so he opened the door for jokes.
His whole devils advocate gimmick is just..
mans whole gimmick now is to cry about sjw posters and act like people can’t get jokes off, op came off as an a****** who can’t take criticism so he opened the door for jokes.
You know Big Wave has some fire opinions about age of consent. Every dark enlightenment contrarian ends up backing themselves into that one