Honestly bro where was the joke
Your goal is to make people laugh, but you gotta do it right out the gate
It wasn’t funny. Too political. Politics are not funny.
I knew as soon as you said Freudian the direction, and immediately lost interest
Dumb it down. Make it funny. Make it simple
Just my 2c
Wasn't really funny but I didn't turn it off. I think for comedy material, you're gonna have to work out your routine the old fashioned way with open mics and just see what lands, but from what I've heard, it's quite dense without a lot of set up or any real solid punchlines to make out. Beginning with the Freudian stuff like that might work against you. Also might help to relate your anecdotes to yourself or your everyday situations to ease your audience into your routine. Keep going tho
Honestly bro where was the joke
Your goal is to make people laugh, but you gotta do it right out the gate
It wasn’t funny. Too political. Politics are not funny.
I knew as soon as you said Freudian the direction, and immediately lost interest
Dumb it down. Make it funny. Make it simple
Just my 2c
I encourage you to finish it, its actually kind of low-brow if you catch the references
Appreciate the advice, gunna go back to the drawing boards after all the feedback
Just my advice
“You guys know how to do the most with the least effort”
Right after you say this, from here on its story time and you tell a couple stories about instances where this happened
After that, you could just go in the direction of telling the inverse side as a man, there’s another joke that’s wide open as well if you are bold
Just make it all funny. It’s comedy not a sales pitch
Just my advice
“You guys know how to do the most with the least effort”
Right after you say this, from here on its story time and you tell a couple stories about instances where this happened
After that, you could just go in the direction of telling the inverse side as a man, there’s another joke that’s wide open as well if you are bold
Just make it all funny. It’s comedy not a sales pitch
Please share the wide open joke haha could use the material
Please share the wide open joke haha could use the material
Fam the joke is right there, you can figure it out
Just to let you know, letting people know a joke is coming kills the joke itself as well
So it going to be an already tougher crowd itt than they would normally
But there are some good suggestions in here
Main thing is practice and always keep creating/thinking jokes and scenarios
Comedy is not easy nor fast, it literally takes 8 to 10 years on average to pop - compare that to like music that takes about 4
You have to keep at it and do it irl in front of others - but it will be a slow burn
you should try it man, there's something in here but it needs to be refined more with more clear set ups/punchlines